The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Mich
Swollen Succubus
If your last relationship ended in a ball of flames because you have a hidden, secret desire, you tend to play it safe for a while. Imagine Jon's luck, then, that he immediately falls into the arms (and cleavage) of the mysterious Felicity Martinez, a woman who not only is fine with his little fetish for pregnant women, but revels in it, her body changing itself to sate his newfound unquenchable lust. But who is truly the lucky one, here? Jon finds himself locked into a game he didn't know he was playing while both he and Felicity give in to their growing desires and growing bodies.
Average Scores:

Xtra123
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Oh wow. 
Kanodin
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Mitch, these are getting better. I like the flashback at the beginningit moves up the action to the opening.
ChimChimanyCharoo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent showing once again  i thought you wouldn't top Short Skirt for me, but this one comes very close...
Bb47
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Personally, I'm not into the pregnancy fetish thing .. but everything else was great!
Boobityboo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Another master piece yet again. No typos, great pacing, interesting story, good charactersation. I must you you are possibly one of the greatest authors on this site. 
SoylentOrange
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Another Michterpiece delivered to the OFB! To paraphrase Kill Bill, you only judge Mich stories against other Mich stories, and this one delivers. The great characterizations, the interesting plot, the extremely vivid descriptions of erotic excess, they're all there, maybe not his best work, but definitely toptier in the company of Fetish Fuel and Needs and wants, hitting every arousing note with sledgehammer force.rnrnTLDR MUH DIIIIIIIIIIICK
Deux Anges
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is an excellent contribution. Interesting characters and plot, good pace of development. Essentially typofree. I particularly like the pregnancy fetish. My suggestion is that the story could have done with a bit more descriptions of the breast and belly size and maybe more breast and belly play  but these are minor criticisms, overall it great and the best thing I've read in many months. Keep up the good work!
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