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The Overflowing Bra

The Curious Case of Hailey's Condition: Chapter 2
After a growth attack that lasted eight hours, Hailey experiences another growth spurt that leaves her 32N breasts even bigger as she struggles to adjust to her new reality. (File includes edited Chapter 1 with added details.)
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
1 point off, only, from perfect. I agree with the comment that more vivid breast descriptions than cup size would help immensely. Extra points awarded for recognizing how heavy her breasts are and how much they sag. 

Suggestion request keep saying, as was mentioned in chapter 1, all the stretchmarks she has from her growth, and describe her stretchmarks. And emphasize how difficult painful it is for her to try to run, or even walk, with twenty pounds of tit  even in a doublewired bra.

Gotta fix if she gained four pounds is two days ... she's starving to death, and eating ravenously, to fuel that tremendous growth. And her skin is taut, stretched uncomfortably painfully, and REALLY stretchmarked now.

Great story, can't wait to see the next chapter! Really good, thanks.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This has been an amazing story  my only comment is that you're lacking more imagery describing her breasts before and after growth spurts  avoid bra sizing and stick with body comparators.  Big as her head, overflows hands, areolas the size of plates, etc.

1010 though will read again and again, ty
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Anything involving inside her breasts, preferably anything involving changes to her milk glands and her feeling it would be lovely.
Gus Rockman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This might genuinely be my favorite BErelated story I've ever read. It's literally the exact style that I love realism. PLEASE continue, because this is fantastic. I only wish you could write more and more quickly! Thanks for sharing.
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Really excellent story. It is reading as very real to me, which is a nice change. Thanks for your efforts, and I look forward to more. 
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutely amazing! My only regret is that the instalments aren't longer andor more frequent!
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