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Valerie Song: Drama Bomb Part 8
Roxie the horny MILF finally gets Valerie all to herself. Unfortunately for Roxie "all" of Val turns out to be a lot more than she bargained for!  Meanwhile Tasha and Tony play some "games" ;) upstairs. Feat. special guest star Neil DeGrasse Tyson.
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I absolutely love the series so far! Please continue with more focus on Tasha and Tony, but especially Tasha as she learns and grows into accepting her being such a huge futa!
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I think you write really well. The quality is above average for a lot of stories on here.  The content is not for me but others might like like it.  It was a waste of time for me to read it.  but it was written well.
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I posted again on the Redditforum to clarify because I typed out that comment when I was sleep drunk apparently. I do agree that there's at least 56 warning flags already for the story including futa but it's definitely the Caition Hot lawsuit mentality I was going for that McDonalds got to go through because the coffee they were serving was in fact too hot and gave 3rd degree burns to the poor old lady who won. Case in point, it might be as obvious as hot water being hot when you order cofffee but that didn't stop that historical lawsuit. Putting more flags might not actually do anything but you can at least point to them and say see I told you already. 
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Thanks, KTC! I really appreciate you weighing in on this. Yeah I left futa out of the description for this chapter and that was my bad. But I'm gonna say it's written all over the descriptions of the other chapters so if someone got surprised at the futa content in them then maybe it might be a clue as to how they missed the BE content as well. When you see a sentence like hyper hung futa Valerie Song is at it again in the description, you shouldn't need a hashtag to alert you that the story may contain futa. But then again people sue when a bar of trail mix doesn't post the warning contains nuts on the packaging so maybe I'm the crazy one.
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Personally iovw your writing because they are so funny to me. This particular series is certainly futa heavy in nature and I can understand why somebody dislikes it. That said it should t seyract from the quality pd the story because you dislike it's fetish npr does it invalidate it's presence on the forum. I know prefer writers to be writing and discouraging them tends to not help that process. That said, probably a few warnings in the little summary, the very top of the page etc would help those who have no futa interest to avoid it and of course not leave unncessarily mean comments. I know I ha e my own preferences and I made them apparent years ago to an author who then essentially stopped putting anything on this site, and j would have for that to happen for no reason.
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Hi, yeah, the author here. In this chapter there is no BE, but it ties in with the larger series where BE does take place and the aftermath of some of that BE is mentioned in this chapter. There will also be BE in the next chapter immediately following.
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
There is no reference to BE... This is a PE story.  And this reads like an 11 year old wrote it.rnPut this on another site.rnAwfulrnjust awful
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