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The Overflowing Bra

Dongstar
Valerie Song DOCX Compendium
Remember Valerie Song? The totally crazy, totally sexy futa with the endless erection and bottomless balls? She's back, in DOCX form. 
Contains Chapters 1 and 2 of Hot Yoga and chapters 1-7 of Drama Bomb.
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amanDDa
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I agree with the person who upset your ego.  The main focus of your story is not BE.  It's better than some of the tripe that was posted on here a few years ago but it  doesnt have enough BE content to be here.  IMO
Dongstar
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Hi, yeah, the author here. BE is not the main focus, but there is BE in it quite extensive in some scenes. And if futa weren't allowed, why is shemale one of the searchable categories? If you didn't like the story or thought it was low quality then it's your prerogative to rate it on its merits as a narrative, but trying to get it deleted on a technicality is petty and dishonest.
Futile Futa
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
This is FUTA not BE.rnMake it go away.
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