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The Overflowing Bra

Valerie Song: Drama Bomb Parts 1 thru 7
You know how embarrassing it is when your hyper-hung sex-maniac mom drives you to the mall and insists on meeting your friends and then floods the mall with cum after an absolutely insane orgy at an underwear store? Tasha Magnum does. The bashful teen futa has enough problems keeping her six-foot schlong secret from all her friends at school without being totally humiliated in front of the cheerleading squad by her pervy mom, nearly drowning in her own cum and literally crushing her crush beneath her behemoth boner. Then things get worse.
Featuring special guest appearances by George Takei and Frank Nelson.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
It's funny and fun to read, as long as you don't take it too seriously. It's kind of written like a 90's sitcom. There's not nearly enough BE for my taste. If you like impossible insertions and cumflation, this is great for you. 
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Is this a five of five? Yes, this is a five of five.Must be read to be fully appreciated.
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