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Dongstar
Valerie Song: Hot Yoga
The She-cocked Sensation, the talk of the nation, Valerie Song in the story that started it all! For the first time on Overflowing Bra.
Hyper-hung futa Valerie Song enjoys some brunch before her yoga class and things get a little nuts. Okay, they get big nuts.
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Karen
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 5
Sarko,rnI'm not sure why you feel you have to defend this author.  The focus of the story is not BE.  I have read just about everything on this site and stories that have lousy or inadequate BE content get harsh reviews.  rnSheesh  lighten up.
Sarkopheros
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I have already communicated to Dongstar what I thought of these stories. rnrnBasically, if you like hilarious nonsense and girlcocks measured in yards and sexual rampages, then these are great stories.rnrnBE was not the core theme of these stories, but I felt that what was there was described very well.rnrnKaren, the description literally says Hyperhung futa at the beginning of the second sentence.
Karen
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 5
Shemale is not Futa.  There is no way to know this is a Futa story from the description.  Maybe in the future you should put a disclaimer before the story.  Lots of others do.  It's a courtesy for your readers.  That way someone who isn't into Futa could skip it and you wouldn't get so much feedback that bruises your ego.rnrnBUTrnrnAs well as you write I would totally love for you to write a true BE story.rnrnDon't take all this too personally.  Look at the number of downloads.  That's the true test. 
Dongstar
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Author here. SheMale is one of the searchable categories on this site, so obviously people come here looking for Futa stuff. FourofaKind is a great example of a futa heavy BE story on this very site. So... if you don't like futa then read a different story. But there is BE. Apart from these comments under my own name I have not rated on my own story nor solicited any ratings.
Futa Trash
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
If you are looking for BE skip this trash.  If you are looking for Futa then.... why did you come here in the first place?  I think the two reviews that were left were written my the author or one of his friends.
Lily Bunny
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Leaving all 5s so as to not disrupt your score...rnrnHi there, these seem like really fun stories, however, in the form they are in I cannot read them. I am legally blind and I use special software to help me read the stories here. However PDF files seems to give my software a bit of trouble. Would you consider maybe putting up .txt or .doc versions of your stories? Or if you could link me to a nonPDF version that would also be good. rnrnThank you for listening to my request at the very least. rnrnLily 
Midnighthalo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I have to admit. This writer has created something I did not think was possible. They have created an eroticcomedy story. The transformations are great! The dialog between the characters are witty and sharp. You do not loose the thought of reading an erotic story, but the comedy that is mixed in during even the hottest lines of text is spot on and made me burst out in laughter. Good job! Keep it up! I will certainly read more from this writer!!!
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