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The Overflowing Bra

Kodos
10 Days in the Life of a Librarian, Part IV
Persephone awakens to find that she finally has the spectacular bustline that she's been longing for, and needing to milk herself now doesn't seem like too much of a price to pay, but how much bigger will she get before her breasts become bigger than even she desires?  And what is her returning housemate, Elena, going to think of her steadily-ballooning boobs?
Average Scores:

John Cena
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I think this was a really great story.The descriptions were pretty good, the characters are enjoyable, and the detail was a nice touch.  rn However, you need a bit of work in the formatting department. There were times when I couldn't tell if she was talking or imagining. You could use Italics for her imagination in order to separate them better. 
FleshFan
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Good continuation, cant wait for the next
FredGarvin05
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm a big fan of lactation fantasies. I just finished reading parts 1 through 4. This had what I needed and then some!
clibretto
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutely fantastic. This is easily my favorite BE story in recent memory. It checks all the boxes for me slow growth, with some scenes the dreams of fast growth, lactation, realistic weight of absurdly sized breasts, etc. As usual, I cannot wait for the next installment. 
Kelberon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
5 stars all around.
ZS
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is probably my new favorite story. The little bits of belly bloating have been amazing  if this turns into some assgrowth for the roommate as you seem to be hinting I'll die happy. Cannot wait for the next part! 
GeoffK
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I've been waiting for this update and it didn't disappoint.  The growth, descriptions and overall story were all terrific.  It has taken a few installments to get to really huge size, so I was happy to see her finally becoming truly huge.  I'm really looking forward to the conclusionespecially with the teaser at the end.rnrnKeep up the great work!rn
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