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The Overflowing Bra

Rols Garten
Paul's Problems 10: The Battle of Greek Row
The final battle begins. Will Paul and the girls be able to stand up to Claudia? Will Allison become an Amazon again? Will Paul be alone on his birthday? The answers to all this and more are in the final chapter of Paul's Problems.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very nicely wrapped up. I feel like the epilogue dragged on a little too long  maybe it could have been a vignetteslashsequel or something.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
a fantastic story from start to finish, a nice touch with images of the girls, a great theme and a great ending would like to see another story of Paul and the girls or new stories you have in the work thank you again for a brilliant story
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