It's been a while since I wrote my first entry. I'm looking to see if there is still some interest. I cut it off early, so it's less than two pages in.
People were asking for more detail, so I'm giving that. If this is well-received, then I'll finish this (hopefully soon) and conclude Bethany's 'little' pregnancy adventure.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.38
- BE: 4.13
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
ThatGuy8620
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
More? Um, yes please! This is a story I've been waiting to get followed up on for some time!
damn
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
My kind of story! Big in all the right places, and a personal fan of the big pregnancy. Please don't stop! Would love to see her keep growing!
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I like the story. Its original kind of. And the description is better then average. I suspect you like wide asses too, which is OK but its not the reason I come to overflowing bras. Can't wait to read the ending!
Tailsko
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Good start, but a bit short to get a full perspective. Keep it going and it will likely become more than just good!
braindawgs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Pacing and descriptions really stand out, looking forward to more. Will be interesting to see what happens to the cheerleaders as well.
Bdizz
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really liked your first entry in this series. I hope you continue and finish this one! Hope she gets bigger too!
jarath76
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
loved the 1st one. like the beginning of this part. I do hope you finish it.
deuxanges
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It's a good start, but far too short a preview to really allow a meaningful review. The narrative is well described and essentially free from typos, but there isn't enough BE descriptions at this point. The pregnancy is a nice touch, would like to see how that continues.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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