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The Overflowing Bra

Leviathan, Adama, and Jake T Catt
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Ultimate BE Story: Magic Wand
Two mischievous highschool boys find a powerful magic wand. Based on the Addventure.
Average Scores:

Very Free
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Are stories written in the present tense all that common? Actually, who knows, since who knows where they're at in time? Good story, even if it's a bit topsy-turvy.

Sfliminality
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is one of the more fun stories I've seen.

sigley89
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Really good BE storie i'v seen

Cocoakins
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Love it, the ferrets in there were totally original. <33

Leviathan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

It's the best story ever written!

Anonymous Bob
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very good all around. Excellent writing, great BE, likable characters, and all that.

shadow205525
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

sgs

Prophet Tenebrae
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Other than psychophantic authors, it's good. ;)

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