The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

PlusOneZing
The Body Shop, pt V
Ryan was just trying to run a business... what the heck happened?!?  After the.. experience he shared with these women, some want answers, some want life to be normal again- and some didn't want that experience to stop.  But just when Ryan thinks he can get on his with life the chickens come home to roost.  Thing is they've got a lot of roosting on their minds....
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DoubleH
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Liked it
amorousUltimatum
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Man, I never thought there'd be another entry in this series, glad to see it again. Was kinda hoping after that start that we'd be getting to see some of the grander consequences of what happened but endless smut is also fine 3
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