The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Kodos
10 Days in the Life of a Librarian
When Persephone happens upon a recipe that could make her bust every inch as massive as the buxom woman who comes to her library, she can't resist finding out if it really works, no matter how uncomfortable the side-effects might be.
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mynameisjeff
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I really can't wait to see the future for this, with such a great start already. 
clibretto
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loving this so far and very much looking forward to the rest
ZS
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Holy moses this was a good start very pumped for the full upload 
Lily Bunny
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Ohmygod Hot So hot Super fucking hot Please please do not make us wait too long for the next chapter 
GeoffK
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome start  This looks like a future classic  Cant wait to read the next installmentsrn
Kodos
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
And Im a doofus who doesnt proofread enough  This is just part one the rest of the story is coming soon
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