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The Overflowing Bra

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Bound for Fun Part 1 - The Collar
Jen buys herself a collar to kink up her sex life with Travis, though there's more to her new toy than she realizes.
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Bb47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic!!!!  A must read!
Whiki
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great start to a new story, looking forward to future chapters
buddyu
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I like the story Would love to see how extreme they take the changes
Swogrider
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
What a great first story The concept has a ton of potential behind it and the characters feel believable which is definitely something to point out where most of the stories here have 2dimensional masters playing with 2dimensional slavesrnrnReally looking forward to anything else you plan on writing
Knightwolf1785
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It was awesome I just wonder if getting her pregnant and lactating is next Could be a lot of fun trying out a few anthro builds for her too 
TheEarl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very enjoyable  its rare to find a story thats got rounded characters that are into consensual transformation and youve done a really good job with it Good to read and very hot  please write morernrnThe Earl
FireFox
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very enjoyable hope we get more from you
sp1kegrw
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
wanting to read more of this story 
Catfish
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Takes a while to get to the BE but its definitely worth it The collar with its powers has a lot of potential so Im looking forward to future chapters
Maik
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
For me it is very good But I want more male muscle transformation 
superdutz
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Great intro story with a premise I can get behind I love the concept like this and am really excited to see it take off in new ways with some more interesting changes and also seeing the collar outside of the bedroom for some different scenarios
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