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The Overflowing Bra

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Priestess Katie prt 1 through 4
Katie overhears a bully calling her a slut and makes the decision to erase all record of her sexual activity with her newfound powers.
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Anshu
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I love the storyline and hope it continues soon. Im waiting for it! 
bro
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow such a dark story Very very very enjoyable
kate
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I copied and pasted each chapter into Word and the formatting was fine there.  Not sure why you chose the way you did.
It was kind of flat.  I mean the premise was great and kind of new.. You put a lot of time into it. 
Overall I liked it.
Nice le
Someone
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
To the person complaining about the story being a wall of text - it is formatted, notepad is just crap and the file has unix newlines in it (probably written on a mac or linux).

Open it in a sane text editor (anything *other* then notepad), and it's properly formatted.
Viper
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I'd love to see the story properly formatted. I took a look at the first part it was simply a wall of text. Re-format for the eyes.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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