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The Overflowing Bra

Raoul Duke and L.E.
Unknown
True Dreams, The Costume Store
Collected and expanded from the Addventure, this tells the tale of businesswoman Marjorie as she picks out a sexy schoolgirl costume for a party and finds herself slowly changing.
Average Scores:
 Grimes
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
About the best there is, if only more such tales were written in this story's universe
 Arbitrary Point
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
A great bimboizing tale of big boobs, hidden desire, and vivid sexiness.  A+.
 Arturo
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2 
liked this story. a bit confusing in places but cleverly written
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