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The Overflowing Bra

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Trouble in Daris Kingdom
Magical trouble strikes a kingdom as men turn into women and other magical sex problems occur.
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DarkHeart
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

Not badly written, I liked the detail of some of the weird stuff, but while there was BE, it was lacking in good description. The ending was far too short and abruptly cut off.

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