The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Problem, The
A young fiancee suddenly starts growing giant boobs for no apparent reason, and has to be sent to the hospital. Can they cure her before she grows too large to live?
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

This story is very clever, with a more serious tone than others I've read. It adds a touch of realism to an unrealistic scenario. I'm both frustrated and delighted with the open ending. Let's me imagine what happens after this.

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