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A brief story about some late night romps with a magical charm. I wrote this as a quickie one night in my spare time. Let me know if quick one-offs like this are alright with you guys.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.25
swellhugs
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Loved it.
Really looking forward to a sequel!
HotSoda
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I do enjoy quickie stories like this! The focus on actually having sex and the lewd descriptions push it over the top, and I don't even mind that BE isn't the sole focus here.
Fun read, might even read again.
It is a shame that we only got to see 2 out of 3 characters really use the charm properly, though.
Rols Garten
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Could have stood to have it go on for just a bit longer. Thought that might just be because I like redheads.
Blargenofram
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Pretty good for a quicky one-off!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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