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The Overflowing Bra

Tigeras
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Switched Witch
A friendly but nearsighted witch messes up a magic potion.
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Above Ground Swimming Pool�����
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

Thanks for the news! Just was thinking about it! By the way Happy New Year to all of you:D

Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Needs to be longer; you've got the beginnings of a great story here.

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