The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Joejoe
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Sweet Tooth
A weird brand of sugar has weird effects on a young woman.
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 Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Way too short! This would be good for the start of a really good story.
 John Q. Nixon
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4 
It's not a bad story, but I'd kinda like for it to be longer, and more detailed. More, more, more!
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