The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Wolfgang Druskat
An alien sphere takes over a young girl and transforms her into a perfect host.
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Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Not bad. The change in point-of-view was kind of confusing.

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