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A growth hormone induces spurts of radical growth in a teenage girl and guy.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.40
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.40
deus
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
A good start, but it was over too quickly. Also, I know this is BE/MPG, but the proportions were really unrealistic. Even if she is 9' tall, no woman is going to be able to take a 32"-40" cock. Where would she put it? Plus, 20" thick? That's almost 2' wide, how wide is his waist?
If you added more scenes and toned down the proportions, stretched out the growth over a little more time, this story would be one of my favorites.
DarkHeart
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A little lacking in details and seemed to end a little too abruptly, otherwise it was a fun read.
Amused Reader
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story! You should've made a sequel.
veryfree
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Ducksworth
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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