The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

B3
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Simon Goes To The Park [Simon 3]
Simon forces a woman to drink water as her breasts expand.
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 Eddie
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 1 
The quality of the story has gotten progressively worse. You haven't even had the courtesy of using spellcheck Austrailia, Magition, dirgressing, cardidan, insperation, athleate, and so many more bad spellings. Sheesh!
 Anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
Once again, this is an okay story all-round though it's not as humourous as the first.
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