The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

'Phalus
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Second Skin: The Birth of Lasex
Aliens begin to takeover Earth, bonding with humans and transforming them into sexy amalgam creatures.
Average Scores:

jacko
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Awsome!!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

BE_Fanatic
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Probably one of the best stories on this archive so far.

123
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Awesome story! part 2?

DK
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

great, absolutely great!

ROBRAM89
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very similar to Essence, because if it ain't broke, don't fix it. A great story, and very similar to 'Phalus's masterpiece, which makes it an automatic 10 by my scale. Keep up the incredible work.

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