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The Overflowing Bra

Hugh G. Breastman
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An American In Hell
Brenda meets an old man who grants her the power to alter her form, as long as she doesn't commit any of the Seven Deadly Sins.
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Gaffenheimer
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This was a great read. The expansion scenes were well-written, and the woman's horror at herself is entertaining. Even without clothes bursting or bimbification, it is great.

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