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The Overflowing Bra

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Reward, The
Roger releases an ancient being from its prison, and as a reward, receives magical powers which he uses to make Tracey his slave.
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Chaos-Master
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

8/20/2010 Please continue to write this storyline, I want to know what Richard will do to Diana next. Will he ever reveal he's her master? If not, how will he give her orders or tasks? PLEASE keep writing in general as well as this particular storyline

JR Parz
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is a Hall of Fame story... and a MUST read!

Marto
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

One of the first stories I have read and still one of the best.

J
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I like how easy this story is to read. Once you get started you want more. I also like how it goes between his thoughts and his toys.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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