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The Overflowing Bra

Nok Nok
Unknown
Retribution
Nymphomaniac wife of a genetic scientist has an affair and pays the price.
Average Scores:
 Zed
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
A thoroughly enjoyable STORY. An actual story with people.
A few bits seem a little rushed, but it's not terribly noticeable and only get us through the 'boring bits' quicker.
an enjoyable read with excellent detail
 Flesh Fan
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 5 
Some nice size at the end, but a really slow build up and I'm missing more of the growth description.
 leeds
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4 
took too long to get started.
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