The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Kiba Dachi
Unknown
Passing The Mantle
Kelly summons Aphrodite and gains the power to transform sexually.
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 GreenStuff
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
Some of the best BE detail ive seen, just discovered this one in the archive, what a lucky find!
Keep up the good work!
 Oppai
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Fun and not too drawn out me says.
 shelby
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5 
Great overall story, you need more detail mabey a page or two in length and it would be perfect. I also just found it on the archives, I think it is a great story please create a second.
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