The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Sir Render
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Nursing Bra
Jessica gets a magical nursing bra with spectacular results.
Average Scores:
 Toymaker
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Interesting. The magic bit was kinda unexplained, though. 
 Gaffenheimer
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
A very intense and well-written story.  The growth could have persisted, though, but I guess that's why there was a cliffhanger.
 Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
A fairly good story all-round.
 argusceo
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
Very nice...I always enjoy this story and come back to it again and again
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