The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Candide
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Nanobots
A scientist attempts to use nanobots to regrow a cow's udder, but an accident causes a human test...
Average Scores:
 G
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3 
Not bad.
 JJM75
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
far too short.
 Evil Eye
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3 
Weak story, but i've gotten off to it too many times to give it an overly bad rating... So, here you go. Solid 3. Enjoy- I know I did...
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