The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

JR Parz
Unknown
Alien's Gift
Aliens give Colt the power to use his whole brain - and control other people.
Average Scores:
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
wellworth the read
 Louis69
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Loved your story and the way you showed how the main character learned how to adjust things back to almost normal.
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