The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Hunter S. Creek
Unknown
Little Hillary and Ms. Hyde
Little Hillary Jeckyll finds her father's formula that can give a girl ""More"".
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 supermerio@gmail.com
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
By far the best BE author in the business.
 Brit
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
Not Hunter's best, but a decent atl overall/
 Anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Not as good as the original story (came off as a little short) but still fairly good in it's own write. If you haven't read the original story though, you'd be completely lost.
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