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The Overflowing Bra

The Light Fantastic
lightfantastically@gmail.com
The Big City - An Aphrodite Tale
A farmboy discovers that some of the women in the big city are very, very different - and their outsized breasts and coloured hair are just the start! How will he navigate life and love with a woman whose uncontrollable urges deny her a normal life?
Average Scores:

Eddie
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
5 on BE because it's the crux of the story. 5 on everything else because the writing is excellent, the characters are real, and the story hangs together well. Love the Neil ending.
GoodTaste
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I use this story as a gold standard for nymphomaniac characters who aren't shallow as a puddle. The characterization in this story is top fucking notch and the world building is amazing.

I sincerely hope you write more in this universe, and shed just a little bit more tantalizing light on the Aphrodite syndrome.
BB47
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Dude, Light, you are a badass my friend!  This story was fucking fantastic!  Hardly any of the writers understand how important character development is.  What a great mix of sex and longing and love.  Keep up the great work.
Chungus
Overall= 5, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Loved reading this story. The struggles and consequences help suspend disbelief. Character depth and overall plot are also far above average. I think an opportunity was missed,  though. Detailing some of Siobhans massive-even-for-Aphrodite growth would have added much. 
Le Plume Rouge
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Can't wait for future chapters! I've read this story twice in as many days, and was so engrossed in the reading that I completely forgot to jack off.
Scorpan
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really big fan of a few of your stories, especially the recent "Sweet Tooth", but this is easily my new favorite. Great characterization and interesting world, on top of your usual ultra-steamy sex scenes. It was extremely dramatic and made me think a lot about the nature of relationships and people and sexism along the way, when it wasn't all so unbearably sexy that I couldn't stop fapping. Like another reviewer, I do wish there was more of a solid resolution, but it also seems like this story is a setup for future ones. I'm not a fan of monogamous relationships, but this story showed an interesting dark side to my fantasies that kept my glued to the story the entire time. I hope we get a happy ending for everyone, maybe even involving a cure, before all is said and done. 
Onderbroek
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I LOVE IT, looking forward to Many sequals 
Regulus
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is such a great story. It takes on a lot of different ideas, and does it well. I love the characters. I'm going out to buy Sandalwood candles Lol. Descriptions were great.  I would love to read more by you in any genre. 
ApesMa
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Wow. Not just an erotic story, but one with characters one cares about. Quite the emotional roller coaster.

MrHHH
Overall= 5, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Really looking forward to the next chapter!

itsasecret
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Loved the story. There was implied background BE but I thought this was a great way of introducing your created world and thought it is the set up for future stories with BE as a focus. And what a set up it is. The characters are more than a walking pile of breasts. Bravo.

TheLogoliner
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Goddamn it. Why is the main character my name? Other than that great story.

anon
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Reminds me of The Broadmoor School for the Gifted.

Lily Bunny
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

As many said, the story has a very big lack of actual growth or transformation of any kind. I do like the idea of a romantic take on some of your more oversexed character types you have built up over the years, although I did feel the story kind of ended a little too quickly. I would have liked to see a little more closure outside of the whole bit of, "yeah we are still dating" bit at the end. I would have liked to see if they were able to make it all work out in the end, maybe seeing whether or not they could pass their original expectations of having this be a "thing that may not last".

Over all a very good story. I always love reading new stories by you and hope to see more.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

One of my new favorite stories. The characters, the world created, the descriptions were all great. Please continue writing this story.

Muad
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The story was great as well as the characters.
Even thoug there were mentions of the past happenings and the growth that occured, I was waiting for more up front and in our face stuff. Being a part of the process of the growth is one of the best in stories on this site.

That Guy
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I liked it. I found the description of the breast size to be great but was a bit lacking the description of the growth process.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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