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The Overflowing Bra

Rols Garten
LLL: Emily
A mysterious entity targets Emily, transforming her into something that she doesn't understand. Word to the wise? This one might get a bit weird.
Average Scores:

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1


Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great start

Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

@Lily : Well, it's a matter of opinion, but yeah, for many, the fetish of black latex like skin transformation is weird.

In my case, I even feels it spoils the story, as it focus clearly on the latex-skin fetish and just barely rely on the BE. Kinda disappointing on a BE dedicated website, particularly when the writing is this exceptionally good.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Very well done but seemed to focus more on the other aspects of her transformation than the BE part. I wouldn't say it's a problem but for it being here, a BE site

Lily Bunny
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

I pretty much enjoyed what I read, but I feel like there needed to be a bit more over all. The BE was alright, but I feel like a little more detail would have been enough to make this one shot to be a lot better. Also, you gave this story the weird tag, but I didn't really see anything that really warrants it, unless you count skin color changing weird.

Still a good effort, hope things will pick up in part 2.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I really enjoyed this story and hope the next part will come up soon. Thanx !

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