Jenna gets an exercise ball to help improve her figure, but the “improvements” it brings are much bigger than she’s expecting...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.83
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.67
Eddie
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Really wanted to see what would happen if the guy bounced on the ball!
Settler
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really nice story! Yor writing stile ist the best here. Please more like this!
Dexter Sinister
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Just incredible. Top-notch work!
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
That was incredible, but my only complaint is that towards the end the woman's dialogue feels really... forced, somehow?
Al
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I really enjoyed this! Very descriptive and fun! I think you kind of rushed towards the end. Maybe take some time to have the characters interact and explore her new body at different stages
cman
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Fantastic as always, though a bit light on actual sex/sex happenings.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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