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Alex finds one day that his ID card has been replaced with one that changes reality...But only for him?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 3.11
- Characters: 3.56
- Technical: 4.00
FireFox
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Could have been a little more descriptive and longer but I still enjoyed it quite a lot Hope to see a continuation of this story
ucwe111
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I really enjoyed this story along with your other stories. I also really love the detail you go into especially with the mental changes.
majmage
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Thanks for sharing! Keep writing!
PeterBE
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
This story was a lot of fun with great potential to continue and develop. I like the way you were describing the character's thoughts and concerns; these are often missing. I would really like to see the descriptions of each event become longer and more detailed. I hope you will continue this story of start a spin-off!
xyz
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I agree with Daichi, the changes were rushed, especially towards the end, but the concept of reality rewrites is something I really like and should be featured more in storys
Catfish
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I definitely hope there's more to come, since this obviously has a lot of potential. I agree that some of the transformations could be expanded on, whereas some of the non-transformation stuff could have been a bit shorter (in particular, the second-day scene of Lexi trying to convince Roy of the events of the previous day).
Butts
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Fantastic concept, if only there were more of it.
Nonny
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I really liked how you described the horror of the sexual instability.
Daichi Azure
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
The story seemed a bit rushed in the delivery of the changes that occured. Loved the concept but it lacked a bit of meat to flesh it out a bit better.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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