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Coffee Pilot
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Fantastic Desire ch4 part 2
The final, yes the FINAL part of Fantastic Desire!!

Derrick the satyr and Kay the nympho-fairy finish their fun with college girls Susan and Wendy. Susan finds herself much more buff and athletic and Wendy much, much more voluptuous. The girls struggle to come to grips with their enhanced eroticism while their minds adapt to a much more nymphish way of thinking. Will they be able to still make it in normal society or will they be stuck with the Ren-Faire forever?

Kay, still trying to maintain a facade of normalcy, goes back to work, only to encounter her boss Claire, who to Kay's surprise is very familiar with magic. Sparks literally fly as Claire attempts to remove the Ring of Desire from its wearer by force. Will anyone be able to get it under control, or will it continue to shape those it encounters to match the erotic desires of those around them?
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Coffee Pilot
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Lacey> Are you sure you're computer didn't hiccup while downloading? I just downloaded it twice and it came out fine. If anyone else has a problem please let me know.

Thanks for the comment too :)

lacey
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

it stops at page 21. I think you need to re upload it friend
LOVE IT

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