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The Overflowing Bra

From an Antique Land, Part II
Filling her new plaything with every ounce she can contain, Odessa set about making every woman in her court so tantalizingly luscious that more than a few are bedridden after she has had her way with them, but Odessa soon finds herself strangely tempted to let herself be expanded to such helpless immensity as she can barely endure...
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A joy to read.  Boobs, bellies and butts galore!  I also like how the feedingfilling moves from characters and the suggestions that Shoggoth gives lend a great quality to the overall story.  And that just makes it one of many great Kodos stories!
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

One of the best expansion stories I've read, maybe even best. Wonderful concept, and very good execution.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Unf. Please make more of this wonderful story! ^_^

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'll be honest - I'm not really a fan of goo girls or stomach expansion, but this story is FANTASTIC! You have a real talent for writing, and each of the characters are greatly detailed and fun to read about. I look forward to part 3!

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