The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Kodos
A Pliable Woman
Finding a girl who can change her shape to suit your every fantasy isn't something that happens every day.
Average Scores:

Diablos97
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Loved it! I was hoping for a little more belly inflation, but the tease for it was fantastic regardless. If you make a sequel, I'd love to see it!

Mortie
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Almost embarrassed to be a male. Yes, I am breast obsessed but I find this a little over the top, so to speak. Would be more interesting if you expanded (no pun intended) more of the effects of food or milk or beer.

awesome possum sauce
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Fantastic stuff here! Please tell me that you planning on writing more about your lovely slime girl, Cass?

Dexter Sinister
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Loved it. Would slime again.

Muad
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

A few mistypes here and there, but overall amazing story. Hoping for a continuation soon.
Are you on DA by any chance? I'd really like to create a 3D version of your characters. Hit me up at muad3d/dot/deviantart/dot/com

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