The long wait is over! Jack and hundreds of other Gifted individuals have been summoned by the mysterious power behind the PMB to participate in a last-ditch effort to pass the Test. But not all is as it seems, and Jack and friends soon find themselves embroiled in action, intrigue, cheating, and superpowered sex games like you've never seen before. Also contains parts 1-4.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.91
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Bb47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Almost.. probably.. maybe... the best series on TOB.
jmsnowy10
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is by far my favourite story in all of erotica fiction. The level to detail of world building is a standard that I can only hope to match. My favourite line?
"I have no fucking clue"
BoobSlider
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent. Especially the scene with the Angels.
Would've like to read more of the reaction on the part of the girls; what they thought and felt about their breasts achieving the proportions they did.
Good clockworks on this whole arch, though. Well thought-out and enjoyable to read.
FeyOne
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This story is my favorite on the site. It's fantastic! I'm desperate to read the next chapter and I am so impressed with the writing skill that has gone into this.
clibretto
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Perponicy
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Do you write books? Because you should write books. Fantastic man, you are the best thing on this site.
petsinwinter
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I just read the entire story. Thanks for including the entire story in a single file. I fell in love with the writing after the first chapter! Great universe-building, great, solid, likeable characters, and excellent, engaging, and funny writing, plot, and dialogue. Part 5 especially had me laughing out loud! Love the use of the superpower lottery trope.
The only bad thing I can say is that the BE wore a little thin by Part 4, but I think that may have been unavoidable considering the circumstances in the plot.
Just one nitpick (spoiler?), Disney/Pixar wouldn't be able to sue Elastigirl on the basis of copyright, because they aren't the first ones to use the name. DC Comics' Doom Patrol has had a character of the same name for much longer.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I've always read you for the SF!
Vadelent
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Should I thank you or curse you? I was too busy laughing to get off... Oh well :) I still enjoyed it and am looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
MrHHH
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great combination of plot, BE, and sex!
Really one of the best stories on the site.
Inanna Banana
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
You are too modest.
This is solid second rate SF.
I'm sure it would have sold to any 1950s issue of “Bursting Brass Bikini Stories.”
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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