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When Grace came up with her plan to make it big, she probably didn't imagine things ending up like this...
(Note! Like in all my stories, there's more of a focus on transformation themes. That being said, there's still quite a bit of breast growth in this one, probably the most I've ever written. Still, just wanted to give fair warning, and I hope you enjoy!)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.80
- BE: 3.90
- Characters: 3.90
- Technical: 4.40
Snoopy
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
please, more stories with this magician...
jd
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
G-man001
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I'm only marking off for furry transformation and the process by which she shrank. I didn't follow it.
glad Volt shared this here and over at mcstories as well. Some truly excellent breast expansion in this story and some hot sex scenes too.
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Did enjoy.
Really liked control aspect. Want more.
Amandda
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love the whole control thing.
Being turned into a bunny with boobs.... not so much.
Well written.
Enjoyed
Someone
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I didn't feel the same way MysteryGuy9215 did.
MysteryGuy9215
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I wanted to give this story a fair chance, maybe try something out...and I'll say that the thing that disturbed me was not the transformation - it was the non-consensual stuff. While it may not be a big deal to some, it was a huge turn off for me personally.
Your writing style, however, is excellent. The BE that you did - however brief - was exceptionally done, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. From there though, it just got more and more uncomfortable for me to read. I may just be a lightweight with this sort of stuff, but I thought I would throw another opinion into the mix
Overall: While this story definitely isn't for me, it is still very well written, and I commend you for that. Well done.
Ilovebe
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I really liked Marvello's style! You don't read a lot of stories like this written in first-person perspective. The humiliation aspects were hot.
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
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