Unknown
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.33
- BE: 2.83
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 3.17
Stryker
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Man, don't listen to the haters. These stories are Shakespeare compared to the other 99% of internet smut. I don't even understand why people are still reading 10 stories later if they hate it. Nothing better to do with their lives?
One thing I will say though: in a story about people with magic sex powers, I like it when things get way out there. You've only done a few scenes like that so maybe it's not your thing, but I really liked the club scene and the hints you dropped about what might be coming later. I'm looking forward to your next one.
some guy
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I liked it. There's been progression in the personalities of the main characters and their relationship
el burro
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Eggs, you get positive feedback for the last one and dont say a damn thing, then you get one person giving you crap in this one and declare that its majority opinion of everyone.
Don't be daft, Eggs.
2.5/5, its alright. Same thing as before but giving it a 1 overall is an insult, you know full well the awful, terrible, misspelled crap that was being submitted last year. Lumping it in with that garbage really isn't on.
anon
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
getting tired of seeing this
Eggs
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
If that's how people around here feel, you better believe I have better things to do with my time!
trask
Overall= 1, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'd like to get this lower, but alas.
It's the same story. Sure, there's something different here and three, but it's the same thing every story.
I don't understand the point of these. It feels almost mechanical
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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