An innocent vial with a mysterious substance decides to give an anonymous girl the royal treatment.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.44
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 3.78
- Technical: 4.33
Guy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really love this story, would it be possible for me to post it on DeviantArt? I just want a better format for rereading this
Guy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Fantastic story, very quickly becoming my favourite on any site. Every part of it is excellent, save the ending which isn't really my thing. The fact that its not in a public setting puts this one far above the other stories you've written, since the private setting allows for greater detail on the main character and what she's going through. I really hope you make more stories like this one in the future, from the downloads on it, I think i'm not your only fan. Keep up the good work
yain
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I approve of the descriptions of the sensations of growth she experienced, maybe a sequel could be done with her progressing further into queenhood? (I have an insect abdomen/ honey pot ant kink and I think this would be perfect for another character)
kaichou
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
a good story and the transformation was a nice touch hope you do a sequel of sorts with the room mate and or show the aftermath of her transformation perhaps making "worker bees"
sluttyshemale
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Ex-Farmhand
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Was kinda hoping the story would continue on after her transformation. A possible sequel perhaps about when her roommate sees whats going on or what she does now? If not, great stand alone story. That said, wish there was more character detail. Yes she's anonymous but little to go on what she looks like before the transformation.
All in all, good story and hope you write more.
Anonymous
Overall= 2, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Was great until she started turning into a bee.
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Terrific. Exciting in all sorts of interesting ways.
anony123
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
fantastic on all counts, please write more!
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