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The Overflowing Bra

As Much as She Can Take
When a girl with an inflation fetish finally gets her hands on a air pump that can bring her dreams to life, things get out of control in a hurry.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

A sequel is defiantly desired. Hope you might consider a upgraded pump in the sequel and even GTS.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Contrary to two of the other comments, I really enjoyed the belly inflation part, but I do agree with Inflation Fan's idea of a lighter than air gas or more about the half pump idea, as listed by MysteryGuy9215's comment. What would happen if Collette's friend snuck into her house and as a prank wanted to fill Collette's bedroom with balloons, and once her small helium tank runs out the only other thing she finds is "The Pump"? :) Thanks for the terrific story!

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Pretty good one! Not gonna lie, I've liked your other works a bit better, but this one wasn't bad at all. I liked Collette's character a lot! A very fun, charismatic lover with a lust for inflation-what's not to like?

My favorite part was the "half pump" situation, where she gains all that at once. That was freaking brilliant! I wish you had focused on that for a little longer, maybe have them analyze it a bit further, maybe a bit more confusion, fear or panic from either Collette or the main character? But as it was, I loved that, both times it happened.

What I DIDN'T like was the belly inflation. Yes, I know, to each their own, but it seemed to come out of nowhere and its always personally distracting for me - but again, that's my own personal taste! But that is the reason why overall enjoyment is only at 3: once you bring bellies into the equation, I tend to start scrolling over to see how focused it is on that aspect. While it doesn't linger TOO much on that, towards the end, it gets very noticeable.

But all that aside, I liked the characters, though I wish you had done more with the roommate. I also was hoping there would be a bit of panic or losing control in this story, but as it is, its still very well written and includes plenty of BE. Can't wait to see what you have in store next! :)

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Loved every bit, definitely need a sequel or a friend using her pump or something!

Inflation fan
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Wonderful content, please write more. Maybe introduce helium? Less belly and more boobs and butts! UGH YES PLEASE

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