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The Overflowing Bra

Muse Mint
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Tess, Story 3 - The Unknown Client
The Mistress told her she would be having a visit from The Unknown Client tonight..  She knew he liked to abuse her, but in the most provocative ways!  Her triple hearts beat in time to the music.  It had been two months since her operation and the Mistress thought she was ready to go back to work.
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Ryver8
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Still great writing and story.

ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The girls all having stupendous boobs and even a futa being included is great. I would really love a transformation sequence for Tess and Mindy (futa) if you are egging for some ideas prior to this triple heart freakyness.

Chuckles
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Although I gave it all fives, that is being based on the other votes you've gotten before. It there a way you can post this in another format like Notepad? None of my programs can open it.

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