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The Light Fantastic
Wish Upon A Star - A Teaser
A short, sexy teaser from the new and improved Wish Upon A Star. If you like my work, if you're looking for a massively rewritten and far improved story of erotic transformation, BE, futa and mini-GTS and above all if you'd like to help support me, I'd love for you to check it out at Smashwords! Link inside.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The original story is free. He asked for money for the updated version on Smashwords if people liked it. You guys are being dicks.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

Good author but no actual BE in the snippet posted. Disappointing.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

Very disappointed to find that this amounts to nothing more then an add. I can appreciate the author trying to make some money, but don't just dump an add here... this is not the place for it. One of the other authors has released all their work free here, but gives you the option of paying for early access to the next chapter. THAT is the correct business model.

Given the quality of Light Fantastics work in the past I am just disappointed to see an add instead of a real story.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

To further echo the sentiments of other posting positive reviews, The update to WUAS is fantastic and personally i really hope all the negativity here doesnt dissuade The Light Fantastic from posting more free stories here and monetizing quality updates to them such as this.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I really can't believe the entitled dickhead attitudes coming from so many of these respondents... especially coming from a FREE porn site. The vast majority of you may not understand or care about the amount of work that goes into writing anything, let alone a 50+ page epic like The Light Fantastic released in WUAS, but to turn around and start whining when an artist asks to be supported (not even fully compensated, just SUPPORTED) is despicable. Get over it. Light Fantastic has literally showered you with high quality, well written erotica for the past few years. I for one am proud to help them continue to produce this work for as long as they feel inspired to do so, and hope you all can shake off your childish responses long enough to think about maybe chipping in a few bucks as well.

As for the actual content, not a lot has changed from the original story (which you can still read, for free, on this site). However, there are roughly 5 to 10 pages of new content, improved descriptors in some of the other scenes and hints at expansion of the universe. To it in perspective, BE story club will sell you the same amount of content with two drawings and pg sex scenes for $8... and never followup in the same story line.

Support your artists, or risk losing the great work they create.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

More than happy to support this author's efforts to monetize his work, but disappointed to find that the full text is largely the same as the previous (free) version already available on the site.

The biggest change I can name is that the meteor shard which serves as the growth catalyst now transmits its power via a slime rather than radiation, a superficial difference; the rest of the story appears virtually untouched, including some scenes that were in dire need of proofing.

Would prefer an original offering next time money is involved.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

delete this crap, if your gonna post a story post all of it or dont post on here at all

Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Now see, I have to judge this on the content you've given us here. I don't care that this is an ad, because the ad itself is not really against the ToS - and I know the original work, and it was pretty good.

However, the story you have posted here (and tagged with all these wonderful things) doesn't *actually* contain most of them. This particular work, is a short - albeit well written - apparently after-growth scene, in which ... well not much at all happens. No breast expansion whatsoever is contained in the sample.

Light Fantastic is a great author, and I respect his right to try and eek some money out of his efforts, but c'mon. The sample you give us should at least contain some BE. I have to know what the original was to understand the scene. Not a good sample, sadly.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Esuna hit it on the head. I do agree that a mention of the differences would have been a good idea rather than a "buy and find out" policy. If it wasn't clear enough, one of the differences is most certainly this scene between Melanie and Priya.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I will give all fives to counter act the stupidity of the intolerant users of this site. Light Fantastic has given us many wonderful stories over the years for free. There is even a free version of this very same story. I would thank the rest of you to not treat him like some kind of internet panhandler, lest we might scare him away from posting any more stories on Overflowing Bra.

I would like to know, however, what changes this story has compared to the original though. I think if we had a better explanation of this, it would be a better pill to swallow for others.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

This site is for the FREE enjoyment of BE stories. Not for you to spam us with pay crap.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 2

Spam. Please delete it.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Since I've read this author's work before, i decided to pay the $2 and give it a chance. I would recommend that you give it a chance. Wish there was some other way to advertise on this site. Don't want this list being riddled with ads.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 4

This is an ad.

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