The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Controlled Conditions
Amy signs up for a clinical trial where the money seems too good to be true, discovering only too late that someone has a much more ambitious experiment in mind for her. (This is my first real try at a more science-based story, so any feedback on whether it’s actually any good or not would be most appreciated.)
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very nice story i love it! More like these please!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Kudos Kodos.. Good job.

Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 5

Hate to say it but far from this writers best work, and he has contributed some fantastic stories. Perhaps he just wanted to try something besides his usual massive weight gain stores (which admittedly i found myself loving). The last boudoiur one might have been a bit too into immobility territory and he wanted something different. This wasnt his best but still a good read.
I'd just say if you want to keep trying i will eagerly wait whats next. Maybe try more mix ups, rapid pregnancy? height growth? genderbender? go nuts man,

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5


Sir Crazy Wolf
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

I liked the whole buildup in the main scene. Amy's growth, and her struggle against the craving, were very well done and thoroughly erotic. I do have to say, though, that the ending disappointed me. Not that Amy came back for another dose, but that her personality seemed to have completely changed. She became cocky and arrogant, and I didn't much like that.

I think the POV shift also weakened the ending a bit. The main body of the story was told (very well indeed) from Amy's point of view; the ending seemed to be from nobody's POV, so you could hide Amy's intentions from the reader and manufacture a surprise ending. This is kind of a no-no.

Still a very good story. I just wish the ending had been a better fit with the rest of it.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I personally enjoyed this a lot. It's certainly not your usual works but Your other stories I liked less than this one. It's well written imo and not too long or short.

Lily Bunny
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Total honesty, this wasn't my favorite piece that you have done. I was a tiny bit disappointed when the girl in the story didn't get all mega curvy all over like in a lot of your other stories, but I still gotta say, I still liked this a lot. Good work over all.

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