Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.88
- BE: 1.75
- Characters: 2.00
- Technical: 1.50
yuuup
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
deux_anges
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
This looks like a rescued file so is badly formatted, but I found it still readable. The style is typical of JB and Invictusvoxfini's work and is quite long. Nevertheless, since I like the big bellies, I like it very much. Furthermore, this was new to me even though it was supposed to have been created way back in 2007.
If the uploader has more of their material, please upload! :)
What the...
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
silverik
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
ac
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Yes, it's unreadable, but this is because this story appears to be salvaged from somewhere else on the internet (there's a notice at the bottom of the document citing an original post date of 2007). Points for effort in saving something classic.
smart
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I open the doc and I see is a block of words. I am not going to read it until the author learns what a paragraph is, and possibly editing.
Creature
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
Almost impossible to read. Please, paragraphs.
Eleanor
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
This is very very hard to read. It is not even broken into paragraphs. Use better formatting and try again.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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