A story about a woman accused of a crime. She is interrogated using a new form of torture system, which causes her breasts to expand with every lie she tells. Please note that this is not political/ethical commentary in any way, and is meant to be purely a BE story.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 5.00
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very creative choice for the method of BE! I'd love to see more from you.
A Nony Mouse
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
A good read but was a bit short. I'd like to read some more of this.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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