Since everyone seemed to think Chapter 2 was a bit too much of a cliff-hanger, here's a fast-tracked Chapter 3! Erica discovers some strange, but welcome side-effects of Beth's milk overnight, and in the morning learns more about her new friend.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.76
- BE: 3.90
- Characters: 4.76
- Technical: 4.57
l
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Maybe some preg action down the line.
Chargerse
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
More description of the growth please, but overall excellent writing please continue.
bob_hope
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
A little more detail on the growth, please!
brando
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic writing! Thanks for this series and cant wait to read more of your stuff!
Requiem
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This.Is.Just.Awesome. Really well-written stuff, one of the best stories I've read recently. (BE 4 points - the deatail is quite short [it leaves more to think about it, than show it], but the quality is great - the BE doesn't in the focus of the story, but still playing important part of it)
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This story is driving me crazy (in a good way). Hope the next chapter is even juicier!!
Sigley
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
MOAR PLEASE!!!!!!!! Also, did I mention MOAR?
lalalalala
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Great story!! More of this! Can't wait!!
meth
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
keep fucking going! also, post these chapters on futanaripalace, the people there would love this story!
ball growth wins, and your proportion choices are perfect.
bobthebuilder
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story still, but please keep banging them out you apperently have hooked a lot of readers according to the number of downloads, keep up the good work and the speed which your making them :-)
Dexter Sinister
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Chris Yohn
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Gah! The suspense! I can relate to Erica. I'd bet that she's going to jump Beth sooner rather than later.
Longbow9
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I can't wait to see where this goes
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Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
anon.
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Slow start but huge potential. Watching with interest.
Cilansis
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It's really amazing. I really want to read more. The characters are engaging and interesting. I hope it doesn't take a year to see more!
The Almighty Popo
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really my only complaint so far is that there's not nearly enough BE yet. Still, the story is going very well, and I'm already hooked. Plus, that scene in the bedroom after having the milk was pretty damn awesome. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more! :D
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This story is so hot. I can't wait to see what happens. I hope more of the same :)
Oppailolicus
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Giving myself 1s to comment:
Yeah, the BE still hasn't really kicked off yet...but trust me, it will, and in a big way. It's just taking me longer to get there than I expected. I always end up writing more than I think I will when I start out!
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
BE isn't a strong focus but it's there. A lot of PE, but it's about a futa girl so it's expected too. I like it a lot. While speed is good, don't let that get in the way of quality (you haven't)! You write well and the story so far is enjoyable.
lordhill
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please write more!!!! this is a great story.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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